Growls surrounding me
My death is near.
A bear has it’s grasp on me
As I wait for my life to leave.
I black out in pain,
Or is it fear of death?
Once I awaken I see my angel.
The blonde angel of my dreams
God has given me the greatest gift,
What have I done to deserve such a sight?
Her eyes are always on me as she whispers
What is she saying?
God comes to see me,
My life is gone forever and now I’m in heaven.
I feel as if I’m burning inside,
So this is what I deserve for what I’ve done,
I still can’t believe he gave me this angel.
The one standing over me as I feel the pain.
Rosalie.
Such a beautiful name.
Author notes
Option 2, write in a character's POV. Emmett's POV, and I am Team Edward.
I actually wrote a lot of found poetry based on Twilight. The only main character I haven't written based on his POV is Jacob..only because he is pretty blunt to me so very hard to write a piece based on. If I can, I wish to submit another poem..based on Bella's POV.
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Comments
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Excellant Write
I can relate to this peice and enjoyed the feeling it left in me...
"Her eyes are always on me as she whispers
What is she saying?
God comes to see me,
My life is gone forever and now I’m in heaven.
I feel as if I’m burning inside, "
This Stanza strikes me...Sometimes we look upon death to erase this pain...and sometimes its not the answer we need we may want but its not needed at that moment
If God brought you to this point he will take you out"...
Thank you for sharing
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i really liked this. i like how you took what stephanie wrote about emmett and gave it more depth, as in how he may have felt when rosalie saved him. wonderful job
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awsome. i love emmett's story. we dont hear about his that much.
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YAY more than one poem!!!!! :-D. Thanks for the comment. When are you gonig to change it to more than one poem?
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