mighty whale
earth's largest animal
rarely seen
ocean surges
with foam's best secrets
fish dart quickly
blue world
captures Neptune's songs
whale surges upward
sun's rays spread
over sea's smooth surface
water sparkles
A contest entry
- Crack A Rib by Cannonsfire.
1000 points, ended August 6, 2008, 14 entries
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i have a poem about a whale posted i think, though no one actually knew it was about a whale until i said to them it was about a whale
people want us to think for them, no one is willing to think for themselves anymore.
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Not less than 10 lines
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OOOOPs! Fixed. Thank you.
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