I'm dying inside
Like a girl on a bed
A man that lied
White sheets red
Between the dead
I slowly creep
Scratching with lead
The wounds are deep
That anal blade
Which rubs on me
A diffrent shade
For the blood,from me
The holes I make
In a rotting corpse
A love thats fake
Mindless Whores
The only friends
I ever meet
Our friendship ends
Intestines i eat
The rod i stick
In the left knee
The blood i lick
A little pain for me
Mine is a normal mind
A life that i define
Pleasure severely blind
A curse truly divine...
Author notes
Pegasus....
trying to capture the soul of a madman
A contest entry
- Give me something DARK PW allowed by Elle Kaye.
800 points, ended August 13, 2008, 27 entries
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This is a very interesting piece, I like the perspective that you took. Thank you for entering this contest
just a note to ask you to check that you have followed the rules - I wish you the best of luck when it comes to judging!
Keep writing
Polly
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didn't follow?
sorry but what do you mean by "just a note to ask you to check you have followed the rules " is there something i didn't follow? or is it that your checking ?
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