Forgive me,
For I have
sinned.
My confession...
D e a t h -
it called.
We talked
&
decided...
life is
meaningless
&
without a
cause
death
sees
only
b.l.a.c.k
&
so
do
I
.
.
.
Goodbye
Author notes
Prompt - 30 Words & the above pictures.
Picture Credit Number One -
http://vampirella87.deviantart.com/art/My-Inner-Torment-58219912
Picture Credit Number Two -
http://vampirella87.deviantart.com/art/A-Good-Night-To-Hunt-54749279
Picture Credit Number Three -
http://rejectedangel18.deviantart.com/art/Lost-Angel-60947907
This poem is only for the contest...
A contest entry
- 30/30/30 Dark Quickie!! by Sensual Angel.
1200 points, ended August 10, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love this poem that you have written. I also like the way you have presented it. this is a very dark write with the very intense emotions of sadness. excellent job
good luck
kat
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A very stark take! Powerful in it's sadness and suicidal thought! Excellent write!
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Nice
I love the way you put this up. Good job!!!
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Goodbye ...
WOW! Hun, this has left me speechless as the emotions knocked me for a spin and made my heart melt in pain and sadness
Wonderful write
Best of luck hun, though this is Gold in my book
♥
Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
Extra clappies
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Love how you used all 3 prompts and it fits each one so well. Great job!! I wish you all the luck!
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wow a very powerful take on the promt full of strong emotions good luck in the contest
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I loved your take on this and incorporating all the pictures wonderfully creative ~ best of luck
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cheater lol im still not very kene on the idea of dirty pretty but you use it very cleverly. well done and best of luck
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