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endure

the shock of amazement is a stone
living statues pose for pleasures
imagination swells as it creates
your body a sculpture of desire

a frozen face of pretend's attempt
emotionless to the gaze of some
a non-existent heart cannot throb
excitement is an unknown breath

move through life to create envy
statues cannot accept reality

Author notes

prompt:
#4 Living Statues

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  • Desire gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Oh My~

    The last line just grabs:
    statues cannot accept reality...
    Excellent take on the prompt
    For some reason a few names popped in my head
    while reading Your piece

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008

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    I enjoy reading all the different takes on the same prompt. The flow and imagery breathe within my mind. Brilliant as they are inspiring and thought provoking. Very nicely crafted. Good luck in the contest.