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In The Clouds

Loving you is like a high.
Every-time you touch me
I feel my soul soar
in the clouds.
With every look
I come undone.
When you kiss my lips
my heart swells with joy.
Being with you, just puts
me on my own cloud nine.

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Picture is prompt. But I would like you to take it from the idea of
"my cloud nine is..."

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  • penman gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done Best of luck in the contest.


  • Crazy Coconut
    July 24, 2008

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    sweet and romantic. Must have someone special on your mind, can feel your thoughts brilliantly written down