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~Strayed Purpose~

Words of condemnation for infinite views,
an angel cast into realms of confusion.
Redemption vital, painful reminders adhered,
constant relics of a strayed purpose.
A decathlon of deliverance, salvation's destination.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    "an angel cast into realms of confusion." no angel wants to find himself/herself in that realm, even I don't want to be there. unfortunately it happens to us at some point in time, doesn't it?
    the reminders of the things that caused us pain, isn't what anyone wants to be reminded of either. you did an excellent job with this prompt. the imagery is strong and jumps right off the page.

    good luck

    kat


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 30, 2008
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    Ahh yes, I can definitely see this in the picture! Very well done!


  • Gypsie Ink
    July 24, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    Thought provoking and stunning. My Muse loved this pic but I was too late to enter. I did write for it though. Sealbh math dhuibh!


  • Kari gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Being in the realm of confusion is never fun. I can only imagine for the angel it would be even worse.

    Question..on the last line you have salivations...did you mean salvation without the i on the fourth letter in the word?

    Sometimes in life we go through things that remind us of painful stuff. That road is never a fun walk for anyone when it hits us.

    Good job on emotions.

    Kari