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Graphic art

Drum rolls of sophistication
prickle rainbow abstract art.
Trumpets play tunes of
notability etched with
pine needles of marble.
Praises sing out with
appreciations of excellence
plastered in nettle stung
mannequins.

Author notes

7. Celebrating excellence in thorn sculpting

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  • Desire gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Oh My~

    Excellent take on the prompt and Love the line:
    plastered in nettle stung-
    also prickle rainbow abstract art
    I almost picked this prompt but the other grabbed
    also~
    The first line just starts me on my merry way
    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Venugopal gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    nice deep poem my child, I enjoyed it'Drum rolls of sophistication
    prickle rainbow abstract art'


  • penman gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.


  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008
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    Nicely penned...do like the 'nettled stung mannequins' Art teases our sensors of sight forming ideas and thoughts while your words paint imagery of pictures inspiring depth of thought.*Rose* Brilliant take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.