Once begun, they say,
the whole pie is prize
sometimes hidden
and saved for dark
(I would not know,
for I am not one to smother self
in egg-white froth that makes me gag)
I go for the roll and mold
of deep-dish pie
(a child force fed, once, mud and crud)
Author notes
Prompt - 1. I can't believe I ate the whole thing (but then you lie pie is so addicting) 10 lines more or less
In a list
A contest entry
- PiF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended July 25, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh My~
For some reason I am craving a Moon Pie~
but not force fed- just in Peace
with my Friend shining upon me
Excellent take on the prompt~
Love the line- egg white froth that makes me gag
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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original write for the prompt and great picture . . congrats on the trophy !!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh yeah nicely penned I Brilliant take on the prompt....had images rolling across my mind....Good luck in the contest.
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yes. deep-dish, indeed.
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