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Reflections in Haiku

misty island shore,
I pause to reflect upon
my life's direction.

beautiful sunrise
lights up the dawn of my heart,
I'm filled with wonder.

silver threads of love,
captured on the spider's web,
raindrops glistening.

your life unfolding
like a stretch of untouched beach
into the sunset!

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  • LivinitupCutie
    July 26, 2008

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    I'm in absolute awe with this piece..it's beautifully put together and the imagery and the wording is extordinary..thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!

    Keep penning!!!
    Lieu

    • harriet567
      September 13, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your encouraging comment. Take care, Harriet