Watching the pain within her eyes
Knowing that inside she cries
Not being able to offer advice
Been told to stay away now twice
Wanting just to hold her near
And help alleviate all those fears
Wishing she would understand
There’s people who will hold her hand
Broken hearts can mend one day
With a little guidance in many ways
No pressure, games or power trips
Awareness finally comes to grips
Please tell me what you think
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A beautiful piece as always from your pen
I hope all is well with you
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bravo
A sad, but still a most hopeful poem, very sensitive and very deftly done throughout! Loved it! bravo.. bravo... bravo...
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Excellent write Jen, love the rhyming and what you have to say. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!!!!
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Damn.
This is painfully sharp and powerfuly expressed my heart automatically reaches out to this poem♥
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Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
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Broken hearts can mend one day
With a little guidance in many ways
No pressure, games or power trips
Awareness finally comes to grips
you may not know it but this learn may have just cheered me up from a thought i was just having, keep it flowing
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true love is silent ,unyielding ,unholding ,no pressure and no gains.. like you say its awareness
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