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Creation



Oh my God!





What are you doing

To my heart?



I feel so vulnerable!


Like a delicate

Piece of glass




Transparent

and

Fragile





When I see you

and

You touch me




With your eyes

and

With your hands




I will explode!



And be transformed



Into a trillion




Tiny




Pieces of fire





Maybe



This is how

The universe

Was created



The world we live in


Is God's lover herself



I will dance

And I will laugh


With you


In her



Forever



I love you so





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Author notes

A love letter. Part of a journal to remember....the beginning. Written on the nineth day after our miraculous meeting; having spent only five minutes together and 489 miles between us.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Hummm...you have worded the unworded story of the God..well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write...