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Barek Obama what a Charmer!/Modern Clerihew



Barak Obama had  such a trauma,
Hillary, as his mate, he allowed her
All the liberties Bill had done,
"Not sex," he said, "just great fun!"



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A try at the comic form of the CLERIHEW. Fantasy, of course???

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  • toomysterious
    August 29, 2008
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    I commented once before, but this time I actually think I got it and its great. You rock.

  • piccola
    August 28, 2008
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    I look forward to Barak's speech tonight. Bill's was great and so was "the silver fox" as I call him. They all sound wonderful it's just a matter of wondering if it's the truth and knowing that not one of them has a wand that can get this country out of the hole it's in.


  • Hetha
    August 1, 2008
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    This is great, I love the humor in it.

  • toomysterious
    July 29, 2008
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    What a witty ditty, but think she talked herself out of that, too.

  • piccola
    July 28, 2008
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    ROTFLMBO This is hilarious. You have quite a wit young man!


    • quantumsurveyor
      July 28, 2008
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      I'm too old for this game - please, please, please explain ROTFLMBO for me, my mind ain't working. I know it will be simple, but, there you go.


  • Albrecht Duracell
    July 24, 2008

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    LOL!

    It took me a bit with this.... I had to wikipedia "Clerihew". Interesting article. When I came back I had to reconcile your rhyme scheme... forgettting that you English lads pronounce 'trauma' as 'traumer' It all falls into place now! Thanks for a great write!

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