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Bad girls

Come into my chamber
sexual delights within
let me take your coat
come on in
make yourself comfortable
let me give you a hand

dipping to my knees
eye contact at all times
gently caressing while the zipper does unwind
slowly I'm removing my top
it's so hot
and while he gets comfortable
I'm slipping away his watch...
Thigh high boots seem to keep him amused
as I slide into his wallet
taking the content's 
while dipping to the song.

Removing my skirt
and lowering to his shaft
smiling rather triumphant
as I finish the last of my task

Author notes

Madam robbing clients.

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  • Swtpoetryman
    December 21, 2008
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    DELICIOUS AND DELECTABLE!

    And quite an erotic and sensual task that it was! You are a very BAD GIRL but OH SO NICE, TOO - as the two are not always mutually exclusive! HE! HE! How much did you say that you charge - and when can you come over - as my shaft is pointing straight at the ceiling after reading this piece and THICH HIGH - latex or leather - BOOTS turn this naughty and OH SO NICE BOY on, too!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    A very intresting piece you have here very well written. now don't forget we will be waiting for our share of all that "LOOT"
    ED.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 27, 2008
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    Hahahahaha....that would make you a rich Madame...

    What a job...


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Just like you knew what you were doing...great job of discribing how you did you robbery...poor sucker he was...but then he deserved it all...Good luck...Darlene

  • Warrior7
    July 26, 2008

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    LOL

    Another great piece in our contest, you made this sizzle an excellent read and it had some great imagery !
    Good stuff


  • catz Moderators member
    July 24, 2008

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    Wow, this is HOT!! I hope you got away with a lot of loot from this guy
    This is good, nice and sexy... and larcenous

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    July 24, 2008
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    I totally LOVED this entry
    Awesomeness
    Good luck.

    ephiphany


  • queen Moderators member
    July 24, 2008

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    Wow, she is bad excellent poem partner I can picture the whole scene perfectly thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

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