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So tired and bored,
Inside my jail,
Being pointed and laughed at.
 
Let me show you,
How boring and a pain,
It is to sit still all day.
 
Now look how people point,
At the monkey man,
Inside the cage.
 
How do you like it old man?
I though so yes,
Lets never use a cage again.

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  • carole21
    July 30, 2008

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    original write for the prompt . . liked "so tired and bored" and "How do you like it old man?" . . not safe without cages though . . this is not the real jungle . .


  • Falcon SilverWolf
    July 24, 2008
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    this was very good short and to the point. very creative and your word play is well thought out