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[ Left, right ]

Left, right
Back, forth
Where to go
Where to hide
I'm being fallowed
I'm being attacked
Left, right
Back, forth
Surrounded by black
He comes again
Takes my soul
I'm not just me
Where to go
Where to hide
No one is safe
Because of me
Because of her

by Jessica Noelle

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  • frozenblackpetals
    February 4
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    (don't hit me but...)
    u spelled followed wrong.
    luvs, hugs, and please don't attack me!! *runs*, lol

  • frozenblackpetals
    February 4
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    u signed it!!! Now im not objective!!! gah.
    grr. u buttface!! lol.
    but BEFORE I read the sig, i thought its a really great poem. fast paced, (imagine me snapping while I'm reading it, lol). and way powerful. 'because of me, because of her'. i wonder... gah. lol. 'he comes again, takes my soul', like, wow. XD.
    luvs.


  • black hearted rebel
    July 27, 2008
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    This was a really good poem!I really enjoyed reading this..wow!It's so simple but yet not simlpe!