Free,flying free
To see who I can be.
Where is there, who is there?
Who will show me
Where is 'free?'
A contest entry
- Inspire Me by shelly webster.
2000 points, ended August 6, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No questions, if you have comments, please be polite and thoughtful
Comments
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a good attempt
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Nice wording and well nobody has to show you how to be free
cause you are, free to express your opinion and free to write how you would like and free to do what you want, but than again we always come back to see what other think, and why , cause we care, and that is what its all about, we care what others think of us , our writting and our life ,and we should at one point , cause if you dont have a challenge than you have nothing . thanks will read more of your works . -
I like how it sounded when I read this one. It just sort of.. rolls of my tongue. But, I just don't feel like this is what I was looking for. It didn't really strike something in me. But thank you for entering!
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Excellent
An unanswerable question,"Where is free", for we are all so different in our attitudes. Well done, very well done indeed.
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