Many, many years ago
There was an ancient oak
Planted by a lonely man,
Whose name was Alfred Stoak.
Poor Alfred was a poet
Who was terribly alone
And so he grew his little tree
Very near his home.
Every day he'd read to it
And talk to it, and sing.
He didn't care it was a tree
He told it everything.
About the colors of the sky
At daybreak and at dusk
And about the human world
Of love and hate and trust.
And whenever he would write a poem
He'd tell it to the tree
He say "Though you can't speak a word,
You have inspired me"
Many years went by this way
The small oak grew in size...
But then, as all humans do,
The poet Alfred dies.
Time passed by so slowly,
To the oak that grew and grew.
And though it was but a tree
Somehow, though, it knew
About the colors of the sky
At daybreak and at dusk
And about the human world
Of love and hate and trust.
It seemed the tree remembered
All the things that Aflred said
It missed and longed for Alfred Stoak
Whose poetry was dead.
But then one day a young man came
Who had the gift of rhyme
But he lacked the inspiration
-One thing he had, was time.
And so he sat beneath the tree
Trying to find the way
To put his words his words on paper
He sat there for a day.
Finally, he spoke,
Unkowing that that the tree
Was listening intently, he said
"Muse, please come to me!
I do not know the way to write
The words I cannot speak!
They're there, Oh yes, I feel them
But they're strength is mighty weak"
And the tree, it told him
Though, how, I cannot say.
What I do know is, that young man left
Inspired on that day.
The young man never forgot
The tree who helped him through
And so, everywhere he went
He made sure the poets knew
About the tree of inspiration
The tree, the mighty muse
The tree who could show everyone
The proper words to use.
And thus the word spread quickly
About the Poet Tree
And many poets made the trip
Hoping they would see.
By now the mighty tree had grown
Near twenty feet around
And through the poets saw the world
But never left the ground.
It learned about the aweful wars
Of jealousy and strife
For every poet that it helped
Would tell it of their life.
The Poet Tree was happy,
But at times it was sad
It's hard to see the world as good
When so much of it is bad.
But it remembered Alfred
And how he'd talk and sing
How he'd fed the tree on words
And told it everthing
About the colors of the sky
At daybreak and dusk
And about the human world
Of love and hate and trust.
And so for many hundred years
This is they way things went
Inspiration was the prize
And words-the money spent.
Then came the day the poets ceased
And never came again
The Poet Tree became a myth
A truth that met it's end.
Though in legend it's remembered
None know where it resides
Oh, what a day it must have been
When inpiration died.
I wanted to find the tree
So, one day, I set out
The stories...they amazed me.
And I couldn't do without.
And it was by chance that I
Stumbled on a wood
Where, though I didn't know it,
The Poet Tree still stood.
And we spoke for a while
I told it all I knew
And in return it told me,
Quite a few things, too,
About the colors of the sky
A daybreak and at dusk
And about my human world
Of love and hate and trust.
And with a new inspired soul
I left that glorious tree.
So don't think inspiration dead....
It was still there for me.
Author notes
This poem is, in my opinion, my masterpiece.
A contest entry
- Inspire Me by shelly webster.
2000 points, ended August 6, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I ask for Constructive Criticism...
Comments
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have going on here. It had a nursery rhyme kind of fable sound going on to it. I thought it had a nice rhytmn to it that made it really easy to read and get through. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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Wonderful way to explain the workings of poets and the myths of muses. Liked the flow, a bit longish, but tells the tale well - like a folk tale that gets better with time. Do not think you need capital letters at the beginning of each line, but that is a personal preference. Enjoyed the idea behind the title and the creative story you have penned here.


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Very good
I read this a few times and though I really loved it and feel it could be a great write, it loses its flow in 2-3 places..so needs to be reworked a little. I really love the idea of it and the story it tells; but you may want to look at it again. Overall, a good write.
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This was good. But maybe this poem about a tree could revisit the chopping block, for it is pretty long. However, I still enjoyed it. Oh and it was very Dr Seuss like.


