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I'm Gripping...
...Gripping with all my might,
I can't let go,
or everything,everything I have gained will be lost.
it's slipping,
my soul is slipping from my fingertips
i'm losing it
Help.

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  • shelly webster
    July 31, 2008
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    Why? I'm a detailed person and I liked to know what's going on in the pieces I read sometimes.. I can definately feel a desperation and hopelessness in this piece. But why? What drove you to this snapshot of one losing themselves? It's almost as if you're hanging off a cliff here, but I'd like to know the prior clips that lead up to this point, though!

    Thank you for entering!