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Painted pain

All I am
Words on the screen
Painted pain
As she withdraws from me
Should I really care?
I feel so numb
As I spill the Vodka
On the computer chair
Wasting time
Night after night
Hoping to find
A way to find the person
That I lost so many years ago
She left never to return
So the one who I loved
And the one I wish I could love
Are all gone
In the mists of time
Shattering the wishing well at the end of time

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  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008
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    There is much pain in this one Jon. Seeking past love that as been lost searching with hope that you may find what your heart is looking for and soon. Be prepared for what you may find it may not be what you are seeking right now....keeping the smile in your heart and the memory alive nicely penned.