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Confused relationships

Seems like a jumbled mess to me
Everyone pushing or pulling me away
Coming undone at the seams

Really look at this
How undone I become

Pacing back and forth
Across the floor
Confused on what direction to take

Feeling lost
In this transaction
Called love

Trapped in the pain
Of a falling river
Of tears and sorrows

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  • dustookie2
    July 25, 2008

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    Life is at times confusing and love chaotic emotions that do pull and tug...I am reminded of one of my favourite poems by Maggie Estep...'Emotional Idiot'that come here go away no come here ... you have caught the emotions jon really good last stanza the pain and sorrow of love. Yet when the true love of your life comes you will know it is special right from the beginning.

    Blessings
    Mook