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A lonely girls scar

The lonely girl this night is happy for her knife because the knife is her relief,
her way to stop the pain,to make everything go away,thats driving her insane.
So she cuts a little deeper and stabs a little spot, hoping someday soonier,she'll finally reach her heart.
The day she does this act will be the last day she feels,the selfish need to bleed over everything she feels.
So again she cuts on, feeling nothing but pain,theres no-one else involved
how is she the one thats insane?

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By: Suzyy

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    August 7, 2008

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    I like the repitition in this piece. Thank you for entering this contest just a note to ask you to check that you have followed the rules - I wish you the best of luck when it comes to judging!

    Keep writing

    Polly