Another birthday
ringing bells in my heart,
for pretty Hafsa
stands behind the cake.
She glows brighter
than all candles,
in her smiling eyes
crimson love twinkles.
May Almighty
bestow his blessings,
to keep her laughter
forever echoing.
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For Hafsa Bintey Faruq
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A contest entry
- Birthday poems for my wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq by Sabir Abdus Samee.
330 points, ended August 5, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow......such a sweet poem for me! thanks a lot
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A Very Good Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hehe gorguse
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Thanks Sweetie!many
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Very Sweet
Thank you for writing such a sweet poem for my wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq.
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Glad you like it!
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Your poem rekindle her heart, you are such a swwe friend of her, complimented with adoring poem..this may be most precious gift she received on her birth day..fine wishes in poetic voice dear sister
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Thank you so much..She is someone I befriended recently..but her Birthday is here and time to cheer!Actually just 2 days afetr my birthday!
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