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Watching the Storm

I hear the thunder
sound from far away
The clouds get darker
as the storm gets closer
Day almost seems like night
The wind picks up
blowing the trees to and fro
The rain falls at a slant
getting me all wet
as I watch the storm blow through
sitting on the porch

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I have actually done this the last two days in a row. It is quite fun.

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  • SomeoneBearyDear silver member
    July 17, 2009
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    Simple times, simple days - I am still in awe and a little nervous of lightning storms.

  • PianoMan
    July 16, 2009
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    Wow! This sounds like an awesome summer afternoon and one doozy of a storm coming. Lol. I LOVE THUNDERSTORMS!!!!!!!! Depending on how the porch is set up I might just sit out there for the whole entire storm just so I can watch the lightning and hear the thunder so much more clearly!!!!! Great job and good luck in the contest!!!!!!!

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    yes it is

    as summer breezes brings fresh new air to surface us with anew way to enjoy each day...thank you for this cute entry
    good luck
    Lin