exposed naked skin, she peels back her flesh to show the shadows within,
to only sit and stare as she shares her hurt and pain,
to bury the knife and refrain from this ordinary life,
to give up all accomplishd and leave your world for mine,
i tend to shed light into darkened mind,
like frozen ice underneath life you'll find,
sewn up and bandaged properly all in due time,
shadows hold secrets that should be left for me to find...
Author notes
sunny22saturday
A contest entry
- Give me something DARK PW allowed by Elle Kaye.
800 points, ended August 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Not your conventional poet but a solo musician also
Comments
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I really liked the first line of this poem, it was the most powerful to me. Thank you for entering this contest
just a note to ask you to check that you have followed the rules - I wish you the best of luck when it comes to judging!
Keep writing
Polly


