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Bittersweet

Wond'ring how long until
You stop penetrating ev'ry thought;
I stop dreaming of us,
Scents stop sending me to heartache,
Memories no longer bring nausea.

These bittersweet tales
Of false romance
Start tailspining
Beyond my control.

Never before did I understand
The meaning of that word,
Yet those memories of pleasure
Leave a foul taste in my mouth.

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by La Vie En Rose a.k.a. Jessamy Nickel

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  • Mrs. C.
    December 10, 2008

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    very intresting imaggry. i cant count the number of times ive felt like this. thank you for entering.


  • Mrs. C.
    December 3, 2008
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    DQ~void

    please place AP name in aouthers notes.
    jacki~dec 2, 11:18 pm