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Daddy
Daddy
Where are you daddy?
Save me daddy
The silent echo goes on

Standing over your grave
Roses in hand
Throwing them on your name

Nightmares

Cold chills

Silent names

Silent graves

Let me be
Let me see

The light
One more time

Before the dark
Takes over me…

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This poem has been published and it is basiced off a longer poem.

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  • TenShadesOfPale
    July 27, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.