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red sock

red sock
alone on dusty floor
dog has new toy

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I can't shake this little feeling.

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  • shelly webster
    July 24, 2008

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    that was a cute one. for some reason, i see it on a wooden floor, sun shining through the windows, dust particles reflecting light.. then along comes the dog, a brown and white medium one, and whisks it away! it sorta made me laugh to myself, even though there was nothing strikingly comical about it.

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  • smart-fool
    July 24, 2008

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    gripping...

    in slow motion
    the socks is thrown
    in the dusty ground
    and a dog is accosting for it new toy...
    cool one ...


  • individuality gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry penned that lifts the spirit into the realms of smiles. ragged and worn the red sock becomes blue.