Raven beauty
aglow of wanton desires.
Waiting in earnest
of love's taste.
Body's softness shielded
from realities loneliness.
Dreams of moist lips to shoulder touch
would unfurl delicate rose.
Petal by petal to hearts center,
love abounds in Raven Beauty's desires.
Author notes
Pic prompt-Melancholie by flordelys
Little tame
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
700 points, ended July 24, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow sooo Enchanting!
Wow sooo Enchanting! No wonder you won Gold for this, Gee its a knock out, fabulous grahpics and sentiments, lovely poweful dramatic descriptives and altogether hugely impactual and dreamy, fantastic bravo and congratulations on Gold you well deserved to win! Love it!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Ahhh shucks...thank you for the wonderful comment on an old mans ramblings
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Such a delicate, nice take on the pic. Wonderfully done.
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Thank you so much.
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