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The Heart

Bang! Bang!
Knocks on the door,
Calling to me.
As I fall to the floor.

Together. Apart.
Nothing matters,
Unless it's from
the heart.

Like me. Like you.
Hurting inside.
Smiling outside.
And all the other stupid things we do.

I listen to your heartbeat.
My ear to your chest.
I can hear the blood
I bleed.

ba-bump. ba-bump. ba-bump.

You.
You break my defenses.
Sweep away
my defiance.

And I hate it.
But I love you.
And that's enough
for me.

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  • Fallen-Phases
    August 24, 2008
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    a very intriguing write, i liked the flow,ideas and the amazing perspectives, nice write
    mlg.