Our pheromones swirl into each other,
stroking the walls of the room
with an atmosphere deeper
and richer than red wine.
You slowly spread apart..
like cigarette smoke would
for the ceiling.
Turning warm and moist
with my breathing.
I raise up while I'm going down,
feeling unworthy of your nectar.
I savour the taste
as you squirm with pleasure.
You softly begin
to return the favour.
I consciously make a memory.
You chime my bell
and my ears start ringing
as you sing your song
of seduction.
A contest entry
- Summer Sizzler...Men Only by Dalaney.
1300 points, ended August 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent write
Phew, what a scorcher! A highly seductive poem. Well done!
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very sensual. my favorite part is:
"Our pheromones swirl into each other,
stroking the walls of the room
with an atmosphere deeper
and richer than red wine."
steamy read. - NANGALEEMA -
I need a cigarette...really
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I like the pheromones swirling...that's really different...
appart should be apart..
very nice, thanks for this entry..
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Oh my hotness.....
Whew....
Where am I?
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Excellent!!!!!!
Your poem has such a smooth flow to it. As the passions build I felt myself being carried along with it. My favorite line was...."as you sing your song of seduction".
When I read that line I feel as if there is more than love making going on, that there was also deep emotions intertwined in the mix too. I thought it was lovely. keep up the good work.
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muy caliente lol *feels the heat rising off said poem* lol i wanna read it when its finished because oo la la this seems uhh mazing good luck in the contest...but i totally swear its worth of the gold now lol
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*shivers* if this is a work in progress, I can't wait to see the finished product...you remind me of someone I know, and that thought makes me blush while I grin...and I bet the one you wrote it for would appreciate it even more I particularly like the idea that the sounds a woman makes are not just noises, but song...and I wish you luck in this contest
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