Love hasn't been easy
This past year has
Brightened some days
And darkened others
No matter what happened
Or how many times I screwed up
You were always there
To brighten my darkest moments
I've put you through so much
From lies to cheating
You always forgave me
Though I never really deserved it
The average man
Would have walked away
A million mistakes ago
But you love me enough to try again
You turned on the light
In my dark and desolate world
And still to this day
Refuse to let that light grow dim
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A contest entry
- Completely Corporate - Round 4 by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 29, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love - i want it all! by eternitydemon.
332 points, ended September 16, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for entering
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that's what love does.. it forgives or the person who loves forgives you. we all make mistakes, I'm no different. I'm glad that you've got someone that loves you.. one that forgives you..
Congratulations on the Bronze Trophy Molly.
mommy
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Beauty
This is such a Simplisticly beautiful poem and I really love the depth fluidity and imagery built all round and through out this poem. any ways really love and admire your style you placed into this poem. I also really liked your wording and the over all incredibility you put forth into this poem. any ways excellent job and that sparkling polished Bronze Trophy looks mighty good on that mantle of yours. keep up the good work as always. Love always, Paul =)
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I know how you mean, but at least you have someone special who makes you feel alive and has kept the darkest days just a little brighter for you.
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