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Tropicana

The sweet taste of Florida
Bottled up in shinny plastic
or cardboard boxes
Gives my body
the nutrients it needs

But like anything that taste good
It will eventually sour over
& taste more like sugar water
That stayed out to long outside in the sun
and turn the asphalt into salt

Author notes

This is about this boy who I was talking too. It was charming at first, but now he is coming off to strong. I mean...he is trying to be with me, without really trying to be with me. He hardlt knows me. My policy is if you want to go far with me, 1st 2nd and if you are luckly 3rd base, you better tale me out for dinner & a movie. hahaha

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Your words are quite eloquent. The sage-ness of your poetry clearly states how mature you are! It is beyond your years...and I hope you use that, and use it well.


  • exithere
    July 24, 2008
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    niceeeeee

  • AndTheGuitarWeeps
    July 23, 2008
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    decent lol
    the guy clearly was a freakshow