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Summer Is Golden...

Summer is a sacred rest
Golden rays warm the soul
Your heart turns magical at this time best
Hoping it won't take its toll

You find love in the strangest places
People you looked passed before
You gaze into the eyes of their loving faces
That you now adore...

Summer is Golden, full of magic
Friends do crazy things
Love is found and lost not to be melodramatic
That's just what Summer brings.

 

Friends are always there for you

Go carting, parties, dances, and more

The summer shows you who is true

Summer is the time to explore

 

When Golden rays die down

Everyone must part...

Leaves fall solomly to the ground...

Summer has gone but friends last in our heart.

  

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  • RainbowSky
    July 30, 2008
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    woohoo, this is a great summer piece. i loved it. good job and GOOD LUCK

  • ea silver member
    July 25, 2008

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    This is a wonderful summertime write, very enjoyable. There is no apostrophe in a possessive its, though. That is one thing young poets must master. All the best.


  • she will be loved
    July 24, 2008
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    Your very best yet!!!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    a lovely image of summer 'B' you gave me sunshine today.. good luck x


  • Meroza
    July 24, 2008
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    Aw, adorable! And a nice way to describe the sun too.

    Best of luck

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