"Quiet, my children."
Mother Goddess draws them near
"He is of our tribe."
Copyright 2008 Holly Dawn Hewlett
Author notes
Prompt: Picture of a bunch of puppies and kittens intently looking out of frame.
A contest entry
- Animals Love A Haiku Quickie by carole21.
900 points, ended July 24, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are they looking at?
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haiku very maternal and supportive of life. Sebastian Venable wants to believe, thinks of the womb and the security of being near it.
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Breathtaking
It reminds me of bringing my youngest home and telling her older brothers to hush when I would finally get her to sleep...Great write.
~mandie~
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Excellent
I just love short stuff .So much has been said in these three lines .Picture is formed Love is obviouse
Belonging respect and faith is present ,Great write
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Well said
Quiet, my children."
Mother Goddess draws them near
"He is of our tribe."
This is a real message mother nature gives us and we tend to destroy her.
Good luck.
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Interesting response to the prompt... Creative and original... and enjoyed...
Ken
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original submission . . thanks for the contest entry . .
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