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Haiku - From Stone Age to Clone Age

Between Stone Age and Clone Age Alone Age ?

 

 

One ova, unheard, 
Waiting, longed to be egged on
Listen mocking bird !

 

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Eagle Owl http://www.flickr.com/photos/pe_ha45/1392895580/

Jester Stratford-upon-Avon, England. http://flickr.com/photos/psycho_crow/174046858/

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  • id love to add this to a book im planning to publish, let me know if youd like it in there

  • this is very intriguing. i feel like i need to know more.


  • echo-ink
    January 10
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    Hehehe!!!
    Very creative.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    January 10

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    Outstanding haiku oh, and acroustic... 'Listen Mockingbird!'

    The owl is cute...but totally spooked me when I first opened the page


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 10

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    how cute

    funny and so telling, thank you for this entry, good luck in this contest,and following the rules
    mm


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4

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    Creative! I love the take on the title.

    ♥ Kathraina

  • jadeangyal
    December 3, 2008

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    The title is as humorous as the poem. "Waiting, longed to be egged on "--this could have a double meaning. Great poem.

  • DoomBubbles
    September 29, 2008

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    i'll admit, i never knew the word ova.

    ahaha how nice!
    i adore haikus and yours
    is quite wonderful!

    i dont have your skills at poem writing but i'd like to think that i can recognize a great one when i see it! wonderful job! high five!


  • unavailable
    September 3, 2008

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    ahhhhhh! you're everywhere!

    how many poems have you written?

    this is cute too.

  • Black-Fang
    August 2, 2008

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    awesome, i love the pictures and how they illustrate the poem

    keep it up


  • Room without doors gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Outstanding

    The pictures really made this. A humourous ku that is even an acrostic with the word owl. I really liked the last picture -very street life. Keep writing my friend.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    July 23, 2008

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    Superb

    Ah, 'tis a fine write indeed. I love the stature of the court jester. Thanks for sharing this one with us, my friend.

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