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I'll wait forever for you

So close
But yet so far away
You are my light
You're there reason I wake up everyday.

Behind my smile,
You see the tears that no one else sees.
You are my heart
You are the tune my heart sings.

I haven't seen those pretty blue eyes
In such a long time.
And sometimes
I don't think I can make it.

But before I jump off the cliff
Or swallow the bottle clean,
I hear your voice.
You're image stops me.

One day I'll wake up
And maybe you'll be right there.
Without a thought, I'll reach out.
I'll find the proof with a touch of your hair.

If you promise to come back
I promise I'll wait for you.
To be with you once more,
I'd sacrifice everything I ever knew.

Nothing in the world can compare to you.
And you know nothing else could ever be as true.

~~I'll wait forever for you~~


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PROMPT! 8-"Waiting but not alone, for you are the beat within my heart, and the smile upon my face, reassuring me that we can make it" Stephanie Wood

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  • None But Nim
    September 7, 2008

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    Hm.. This almost sounds like the prelude to the song "I Will Follow You Into The Dark" by Deathcab for Cutie, if there was a prelude.

    A very touching, sesual piece. Outstanding.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    awww this is lovely thanks so much for entering, i really enjoyed the sweetness to the poem, and the ending was so well idk, lovely
    hehe. but take care
    Stephanie ♥