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Love

The way your warm hand caressed my leg makes me flutter.
As you wrap your arms around my waist,
You hold my hands, it makes me shudder.

With gentle loving, you brushed my cheek.
Intertwined as one we feel so sleek.
You give me such a rush,
And with every single touch,
You make my heart beat slow,
and at the same time,
my heart beats fast for you, you know?

And as the lights slowly fade,
You kissed me.
And as it starts to rain heavier,
You frisk me.

No one's ever loved me like you love me now,
No one's ever showed me how to love
so you can show me how.

Baby pick me up and just hold me.
Baby hold me tight and just love me.

Author notes

"You don't need a light to see someone you know intimately at night." Ghanaian (African)

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  • piccola silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    sensual and soft. Sometimes it's difficult to discern the difference between sensual and erotic. This is a nice example of the sensual. Very nice thank you for the entry.


  • celestial
    August 8, 2008
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    Hey

    Wow, this was sensual. Thanks for sharing.I loved the detail


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    August 6, 2008
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    mmmmm

    what lovely images this put into my head!

    very very very nice write, friend. keep up the excellent work.

    lovely. <3

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 6, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Angierie
    July 24, 2008

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    this is borderline risky Alexandra!!
    but it's very good..lol.

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