Satan drinks slowly
Savoring taste of summer
Stupid girl asks why
Author notes
This is number 21
A contest entry
- Teach me how to write a haiku by notorious.
2246 points, ended August 10, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I know, how can anyone be bored on summer vacation.
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more of a senryu than haiku
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ROFL. This is great. Best of luck in the contest, I am sure you'll do well. If I may, can I ask...what the hell prompted this? I rarely ask this of a poet, but I am soooo terribly curious, my whiskers are showing.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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My thoughts were of a girl on summer vacation, wondering why everyone else seemed to be enjoying things more than herself. Satan is just the active fun part of us in this poem.
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& isn't that the truth
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Other than the contest, that is...
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woah o.o who angered your cup of tea with the devil lol, this is some haiku hope your ok bro. luffles you
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hmmmm... I like this; but I'm wondering if it's too metaphorical...maybe? I'll have to ask myron lol; I'm not a master of these
But i did like it
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Made me smile
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Good write bro, though I hardly know this form myself. Looks good to me!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I feel like you dedicated this wicked piece of evilness to me.
Love Satan & "stupid girl". You have the funniest nouns ever!!!
Not sure if this meets haiku requirements, but I could care less in this instance...I love this.
Thanks for entering such fun for me in this contest -
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Well haiku requirement depends on who you ask. But
this is of the 5-7-5 syllable english kind. It has a season which is traditional and my version of an Ah ha moment. lol -
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Well...cracked me up either way. Go Satan!
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