With your arms secured around my waist,
I feel your breath on my skin,
Your hair falls softly in your eyes,
I lift my face to yours,
Suddenly, here it comes,
Small drops of heaven surround us,
And in that moment our lips meet,
I feel your hand move to my cheek
And my body feezes to yours,
And the rain keeps falling....
Author notes
Here it is... Hope you like it
A contest entry
- Kissing in the rain... Quickie by Angelflower.
591 points, ended July 23, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Awww this is so lovely and tender!
Awww this is so lovely and tender! The sentiments are heartfelt and gentle, caressing and sweet, and you express the tenderness so well, and briliant graphic picture painting in poetic artistry, all sculptes so well that it enchants and delights making a really lovely read. Love it, well done its fabulous.
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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the magic of love is here .....
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oh! this is really wonderful!! I really love this moment that you created! it's so sweet and full of such love! you did a wonderful job!! thank you very much for sharing this!! I really enjoyed reading this!! best of luck!!
Angel
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you really captured a moment here. beautiful piece!
good luck
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