HE'S the part of my life that continually flows,
PLANT in my garden never ceasing to grow,
HE'S an everlasting VOICE in my heart that continues to bless me,
HE'S everything I need.
HE'S the RAIN from the clouds showering my soul,
and I'm the flower receiving the RAIN so I can bloom,
and HE'S the HURRICANE that comes to wash away my sins,
HE'S all I need.
HE'S the DEW DROPS on the very tips of the blades of grass when I awake in the morning,
HE'S the CLOUDS that hover over my head when I look up to the sky,
HE'S the SUNSET and my SUNRISE,
HE'S all I've got.
HE'S the BREEZE that swishes past my hair oh so heavenly,
HE'S the FIRE that consumes my soul oh so deeply,
HE'S the ALOE that covers my heart to stop the bleeds,
God you're my EVERYTHING!
You've done so much for me,
I owe you my life,
and I owe you my heart,
God YOU deserve it all.
So I surrender myself to YOU,
Here I am LORD;
do with me what YOU will do.
Here I am LORD;
empty vessel and open heart.
Use me my LORD;
my NATURE.
Author notes
A very good poem. I actually was singing it when I wrote it but I dont know whether it's lyrics yet or not.
Please tell me what you think
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lovely to bask in the beauty of this poem!
beautiful soul of heaven you have in your gardens and life!
well done! well done!
ears/Seattle
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A true message that is written so beautifully. keep writing. . . your poem is definitly an inspiration for salvation.
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I love your use of capitalization! It really adds to the poem.
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VERY GOOD WELL I WOULD SAY VERY BEAUTIFUL,
YOUR LOVE SHINES THROUGH AND I FEEL THE SAME.
SO I WOULD SAY EXCELLENT.
YOU ACTUALLY GAVE ME CHILLS,
ALOT IN COMMON, AND YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS PERFECTLY
I TRUELY ENJOYED
GOD BLESS...
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This is so beautiful I really enjoyed reading this!
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I like it a lot (a LOT) but I dont think its a song. It is very inspiring. I like the beginning. And the capitalized words grew on me.
I wish I had that connection.
Well written
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Inspirational and overall movingly written, it's admirable to demonstrate such open love and faith. It's always good to read a positive poem, as there is a lot of darkness around. Interesting use of imagery and generally this is well structured. I wouldn't like to critique such a personal and devout piece. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading it.
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Very true words! God should be our everything. This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing it. God bless.
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Amazing and very calming
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This is really good. A lot of emotion.. well done.. I'm not sure if it would be considered lyrics or not either..Lol.. but it would sound good as a song I think
.. thanks for sharing!
Angel
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I admire your confidence. In your last stanza, add a comma to make the Lord, lord, and not you, lord.
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