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a Kiss In the Rain

How can you tell,

  If he loves you?

How can you tell,

  If he is true.

 

Will he kiss you in the day,

  Where there is lots of light.

Will he kiss you in the evening,

  Does he wait till dark of night?

 

Will he kiss you in the snow,

  When the flakes are in flight?

Will he kiss you in the rain,

  And hold you extra tight?

 

 

  7-23-2008

 

A contest entry

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  • Whispering-Night
    August 15, 2008
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    ahhh.I LIKE IT!!!!!!!


  • Sandygram
    July 24, 2008
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    WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hello Mac, Wow, what a sweet and romantic poem you have written my friend. I had to go ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh reading it. I love it!! Such a happy write and brings a smile. or two. You take care my dear friend.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008
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    Oh!! I love this!! it's so sweet and beautiful!!It flowed so well too! From the screen right into the ming and heart of the reader!! what a wonderful take on the prompt.. thank you very much for sharing!!I truly enjoyed reading this.. best of luck!!


    Angel


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    this is a very good piece...Great flow and i like the questions. has a lot of beauty in it...i really like the last stanza


  • Katie Lazette
    July 23, 2008

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    That's my kind of man. Kissing in the rain, yeah nothing like it. Good luck in the contest mac. Lovely write.


  • Kim
    July 23, 2008

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    Nicely flowed and well written. Extra good luck in the contest. I truly enjoyed this piece of art. May GOD bless you and yours.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 23, 2008

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    I love this! It is soft and sweet, with tender words. Don't even know what the contest entails other than the title, but this is wonderful.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm

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