When you're insanely vulnerable;
and your lights are almost out.
That's the time that I will tackle
your stubborn and most fiercest doubt.
I won't leave you somersaulting all about.
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
600 points, ended August 8, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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oh dear...
this was a wonderful surprise to discover in my contest!!
thank you...this is uplifting and inspiring on many levels...
I appreciate you sharing your time and talent with me!
Blessings! Tammy
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a good piece of poetry which flows along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme, my lights aere constantly out but i have mad eyes that glow in the dark so i casn see here and there at different mad angles, then again i might just be high and hallucinating light is touching my spirit lol
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I know that you have your 'wits' about you smile lol and that you can see in the dark lol
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