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[ a cold wind blew by ]

a cold wind blew by
as i sit on my thron
as soon as i take a breath
my hole life changes

i was the king of all you could see
and now iam just a man with a dream
all the people who cheared now
turn ther head when i walk by


i sent on  and wonder why
i awake from my sleep and she
stell is not there beside me

all is lost ever since the one
day i ruled the world
but all is change since we parted
even tho wer back together

in lovely weather i stell lost the key to my
own heart i cant feel the same
..



unless we fix me together so once agen
i can be king of our worlds

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  • Lilith-Eve
    July 27, 2008
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    real good poem


  • Nemo Forevermore
    July 27, 2008

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    i really like this piece, i really enjoy:
    i was the king of all you could see
    and now iam just a man with a dream
    all the people who cheared now
    turn ther head when i walk by

    great write