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sitting around the blazing light
as God embraces this circle tonight
words are said that touch our hearts
and we all will be sad to part
so different inside then when we came
we know we'll never be the same
the prayers were said, the tears were cried
we now have God by our side.

Author notes

you probably don't understand this, that is fine, I just had to post it anyway. I wrote it while I was on a missions trip with my church. it was so cool. it was like God was there. I could feel it.

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  • liduen silver member
    July 24, 2008
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    cool poem. Didn't understand it too much, but I love the flow and feeling in it.