You possess a power
No one else can own
Its like a flower
When its fully grown
The sound of your voice
Brings joy to my heart
If it were my choice
We'd never be apart
I can't stand not being with you
Or seeing the smile on your face
And everything you do
Makes my heart race
When I think about my future
When I'm old and grey
I see us together
And I know you're here to stay
I love you baby
You're everything I ever dreamed of
And I know you and me
Have a Forever Love
A contest entry
- for my wedding by Eternal Cascade.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this one! It's full of great imagery and emotion! keep up the great work and don't stop penning brilliance such as this, my friend! Best wishes to you in future writes. Awesome job here!
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Awwww.....
This is so sweet and so cute. It reminds me of that movie "The Notebook". I like how you made it innocent and sweet.
This is the perfect valentines day poem!!!
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Good poem. I would have liked it more if it would have included more of the male or female's physical description. Maybe the color of his eyes or hair or even his height. All of those would have been great to the imagery of the person you love. But great anyway!
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vickie vale
very good poem I like it keep writing I give you five stars for this one you know how to use the right words in a poem to make it good -
I wish we all could have a forever love.
Good write.
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awesome!
wow i love this poem i am living my life right now i know it will come so i am being patient or trying to and just waiting... great write! -
wow this is amazing. it reminds me of my old relationship i miss him makes me almost sad.
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Great!
This is by far your best poem! The poem flowed a lot better and it hasa great message! Well Done!!!!
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This one is so pretty
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hello again,
just back to leave my thoughts, i really love certain parts of this piece 'you posses a power that no one else can own' and the last part 'and i know you and me have a forever love' these fit us both very well indeed.
i like what you did with this and only wish i could award 1st place to all,
Thankyou so much for entering,
Much Love,
JJ x
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Now this was a bit of a masterpiece; so strong and true and loving - really really liked this one! Think you covered most parts to be honest that consist with the nature of someone who's truly in love!! Best of luck in the contest
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good work!!
thankyou for entering i will be back at the end of the contest to comment,
Good Luck,
JayJay
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