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Father's Way -- senryu

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Father's Way
Senryu
c 2008 Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.


For only Thou couldst
cleanse with Thine magical soap
. . . now God's handmaiden


Author notes

For some reason the system would not accept my custom background, which is in the system. . . Oh, well. LOL!

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  • carole21
    November 18, 2008
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    nicely penned for the prompt . . congrats on the bronze . . !!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Humm..what a image you have sketched..just beautiful work...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write ...


    • BonnieQ silver member
      July 28, 2008
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      Awww, thank you so much, dear Brother, for the encouraging words. I thank the Lord for your wonderful contests, a place where my Biblical pieces can be viewed and, maybe just maybe, help one lost.

      You've had some wonderful entries, so your job is cut out for you

      Much love in Christ, BonnieQ


  • Shakes-spear
    July 24, 2008

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    We ask and we will recieve!

    God has told us what he wants and if we live in his light we will be cleansed by his love. Great write Sis, The Shaker

    • BonnieQ silver member
      July 24, 2008
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      Thank you, precious brother! It is good to hear from you. Hopefully, I will soon be back to writing and posting and reading on a regular basis. Love ya tons, SisBon


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Beautiful Truth

    Yes - it is our Father's Way - only He can make us new creations - it is a miracle of His love and His grace. His forgiveness is magical and beyond human comprehension.

    You have done a marvelous job with this haiku!

    It is so good to see you posting again!

    Love and hugs - joanne -

    • BonnieQ silver member
      July 23, 2008
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      Thank you, Sis!

      Another one on the fly, LOL! I just made a minor change to the last line: I think it makes better sense. As soon as things get completely settled and I'm feeling better, I hope to write and post more as the Lord leads me. I have decided, though, that I will likely post mainly to Christian/Biblical contests: seem to draw a lot of negatives when posting elsewhere.

      Love you tons and more!

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