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To My Shared Soul, Brother of Life, Timothy

Counting my blessings, you come to mind:
my everlasting friend and poetic mentor,
gifted upon my soul, an angel of mercy;
my brother of life, completing me whole.
I thank you for your friendship true
for you shall always mean very much to me.

Your compassionate spirit and kindness
understanding, loving ways, shared so free;
always sending a smile from your heart
to all you meet across the many miles.

As tears fall, I would lift away your burdens
share your sorrows, wipe away your tears
If ever you need me, I'll always be around,
to bring back the laughter within your heart 

If I could catch a falling star, I would just for you.
share with you it's beauty on  nights you're feeling blue.
Let me be your rainbow upon your rainy days of sorrow
just as you have always been upon mine.

My dearest friend when I think of you, I smile.
I think of all the days shared, joyous and pained.
I love you my friend with all of my heart and soul.
Friends, together, till the end is what we will be.
let me be...what I know best, your sis-Star for life
a friend that'll always be there when hope falls.









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  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 28, 2008

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    This is a very lucky soul to have someone who truly cares. A very deep and lovingly written tribute. There is truly a beautliful compassion for someone here. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flwoing and good luck.
    ~Donna~


  • Symphony
    October 14, 2008

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    "If I could catch a falling star, I would just for you.
    share with you it's beauty on nights you're feeling blue."

    This poem was a lovely dedication overall, but that part in particularl was so descriptive - literally glowing. Best wishes in the contest


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 13, 2008

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    This is such a deeply beautiful write for a beautiful person. Very well penned indeed. Such compassion and beauty woven within these lines.

    "Your compassionate spirit and kindness
    understanding, loving ways, shared so free;
    always sending a smile from your heart
    to all you meet across the many miles."

    That is truly him in a heart beat. Well penned!


  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Precious~

    This is another Precious piece penned and what a Dedication- I did not realize this was entered in the contest or I would have commented earlier~
    He sure is a Gem and I imagine HUGE smile after reading this!!
    Excellent!!
    Love it
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 31, 2008

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    Beautifully written -- It is amazing how much we touch each others lives ... Beautiful ~ I'm sure he'll love this.

    Thanks for entering!

    Best of luck to you.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    Precious Piece Penned For Me Sweet Sis-Star!

    You are a true blue blessing of a friend and wonderful sis to me. You always seem to know when I need that extra love. And I so dearly appreciate you for sending me your uplifting songs you pen from your heart. Lovely and poetic beauty you share with me so dear. Thanks for being you, much love and light~

    Brother Timothy


  • Cannonsfire
    July 28, 2008

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    This is a lovely tribute and one that holds so much friendship and loyalty inside it. I smile when I read something like this for it is a treasure to give yourself in friendship to another and have it returned. Love, Chez


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    One can never say enough about such a man as Timothy our poeticweaver, Bro and sweet friend to you both...THis is beautiful and I know he will love it...
    Your dedication poems are always so heartwarming

    Lynda

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