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My Regrets

I regret the fact
that I fell so hard for you
For the second time in my life
you professed a love so true.

I regret the fact
that I poured out my heart
And told you my feelings
right from the very start.

I regret the fact
that I let you back in so quick
Why didn't I put up that wall
that wall made of brick?

I regret the fact
that I believed in the words you painted
Of love never to be lost
Now those words are tainted.

What I regret the most
is that I didn't try hard enough
I couldn't do the one thing you asked
and alas you called my bluff.

Author notes

I am going through a period of self pity right now. Being stubborn caused me to lose the love of my life again...I regret that the most of all

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  • Sandygram silver member
    July 29, 2008

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    Heartfelt Poem

    I can feel the sense of sadness and loss in your poem. I hope you feel better soon. Your words are very heartfelt and touch the heart. I can relate to your words. Take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • Terry Collett
    July 24, 2008
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    moving poem.

    Yes, moving poem. Good in structure and images.