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To My "Sweet And Loving" Baby Sister

Hollow meanings
Unheard screaming
A life forever lost in the abyss

A broken heart
A tortured soul
Forever lost in the unknown

A single cry
No one hears
My final scream for someone to help me

A younger sister
A hellish thing
The reason for all my pain

Though she says
"I do care"
She drowns me and is fully aware

This evil being
In my life
Only here to push me to my suicide

Because all she does for me is pry
Into my already broken life
And enjoys watching the pain in my eyes

I scream for help
As she holds the gun
She fires on me to stop my pleading

I hear her laugh
Glad to see
Me finally dead because of she

I wish my family could have seen
My 'sweet baby sister'
Killing me

Author notes

this is what i feel towards my little sister.... shes out to kill me or get me to kill myself!

MidnightWolfPup

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Comments


  • newnoakua
    August 4, 2008

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    Wow... just so. Powerful. Great job! Such a beautiful piece!!!

    Wonderful job and Good luck in the contest!


  • Yesterdays Memory
    July 23, 2008
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    WOW I like it a lot .... very great write I know how this feels.......